Ah, finally, some good old funny. I love the sense of humor here; I'd be lying if I said that I wasn't sort of a sucker for even the tiniest bit of silliness. I also really like the way the characters look; they're in a very happy spot between goofy and "edgy" that fit the rest of the game very well.
I don't know that it was always very clear how to progress. At the very least, a map might have been helpful with this. (Although I know that a map was on my to-do for this jam, and I ran out of time, so I get it! Something to keep in mind if planning to expand.)
Overall, this one just really did it for me. Oh, and I was sure to take Nathan's advice and just jam out with him to the music for a bit.
Seriously, make sure your music person knows you love them.