Interesting ideas and a unique take on the two themes. This was very atmospheric, the house with all of the mannequins that lit up was especially creepy. There are a few areas where I think you can polish, though. The intro text at the beginning is a bit overlong, maybe you can break that up into a few different story sections, otherwise you might lose the audience before they even start the gameplay. Also, I think some visual cues and affordances to indicate where the player should go and what they should do next would be very helpful. Overall, this is a really great start and I'd love to see how it turns out when it is expanded upon. Great work!
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I am extremely grateful for the tips and overall feedback, it will help me a lot. Unfortunately, I couldn't include certain aspects due to lack of time, as I decided to focus more on the art and programming was left for the last two days, along with some moments of procrastination. I genuinely have a fondness for this project, as its story goes beyond what was shown, in terms of mechanics as well, as originally there would be various puzzles that would follow the logic and narrative of the game. If I have enough enthusiasm to finish it one day, I intend to expand the story, mechanics, scenarios, and everything else much further. Again, thank you wholeheartedly for the feedback!