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I want to like this story but I have so many questions. Like why the player-character is such a dick...? Jeez your surrounded by hulking masses of flesh and your first instinct is to go for fag? Doesnt seem very relistic to me. Like the character doesnt have a sense of danger or something. I dont know maybe Im just a hater; but this seems kinda rushed. 

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The Writer can also waste his own and the reader's time by letting the MC throwing a fit and scream for weeks until he cooled down and accept that not all creature want to kill him.  Remeber what kind of audience FVN are for... 

It's better for the audience to connect to an Furry/animal loving MC, who accepts that fear/screaming and running away wont help him. A little bit of bravery allows the MC to gain respect from audience and the fictional characters alike.

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Happy middle is all im looking for lol. Being brave and being stupid are two very different things. Fear is what makes us human. Which is also ironic because we're still animals ourselves.  SO the whole quote should be fear is what makes us animals. But that's not the point. The point is that if the mc has nothing to fear from the beginning; in a setting where the mc doesn't even have a special skill (No running ur mouth is not a power its a hinderance), the whole story can be thrown off course. Turning something beautiful in to something sad and deluded. And I for one wouldn't want to read that. Got enough delusional people in the world. Subtract from the problem dont add to it.

Edit: Now that ive read the new and improved version.....im lovin it so far. It seems the author has taken the time to really hear out the comments here and on other social forums so I'm gonna continue to be patient and see where this goes. Keep it up guys!!!!

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Either way, the new rewritten demo is out, and forget the older build, the new one is much better. Play that.

Will do and will leave a edited review once I'm done