I wish there was more to this! It's short and sweet, and I think this has a lot of potential if you want to expand it. The descriptions feel concrete, it feels like you're really there. I'm not sure if there's supposed to be more to the story right now, it feels like a very abrupt end as soon as you reach Stage 1. I also really like the title card for Stage 1, the art is quite nice even though it's a little buggy right now.