Nice entry overall, i read the about section of your itch page and understood the difficulty of learning and trying to deliver a game as i always try to do the same and it gets really challenging.
The vibe the game had was great for me, loved the PSX graphics and the fixed camera, something you dont see much often nowadays. The controls were sometime hard to handle but i understand it was part of the learning.
Loved the ambience and music, got me in the mood from the start. Just to aim to a max score i think adding SFX would've being great, at least the steps and interact sounds.
Sometimes text was too long and hard to read, but i engaged with the story. Too bad it seems unfinished. At least the game "ends" in a thank you screen and i think thats fair.
It seems that with the assets and the work you had until that very end, you needed a little more time to end at least a couple more loops to deliver the project perfectly with a story.
Besides all of this, you guys did a really good job!