correction suggestion: "Traits are things that may difficult things for you."
"Traits are things that add difficulty or complication."
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"Obey it's creator command." should be "Obeys its creator's command."
"bloacks" should be "blocks"
"backstabb" should be "backstab"
"move in packs" should be "moves in packs"
"neighbhoors" and "neihgbours" should be either "neighbors" (US English) or "neighbours" (UK English)
"Tthe" should be "The"
"combustile" should be "combustible"
"Scracthed" should be "Scratched"
maybe replace "vicinities" with "environment", "environs", or "surroundings".
Yeah I love the creativity of this module so much. The art adds beautifully to the evocative descriptions you give. Having stats translated into so many NSR games makes this highly versatile. I am also learning a good metric for translating other monsters on my own now.
However this has a TON of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. Sometimes I don't even know what you're trying to say. Makes it hard to read in areas.