Overall I think the concept for the game is really nice and the minigame is pretty good.
Some critiques and suggestions
- Instructions aren't completely clear on how to play the game and has some spelling errors. Adding information on how you can only move clockwise would be good.
- I think it would also be good to add some numbers to the clock as not everyone is well versed at looking and reading an analog clock. A way to fix this could be to show another character on the clock that would be controlled by the crank to symbolize where the player would teleport to.