Wow, what a great opening! Super cool hook for first impressions.
Gameplay is a bit rough, I think camera sensitivity option would be nice. I also found it a bit difficult to use the lock-on ability. Story, art, and sound design is great! I liked the customization in the beginning as well! One small nitpick from me would be to go through and fix typos, as it could be difficult for someone to understand, especially if a player does not have English fluency.
Great work and well done!