Post by Caracal429 in The Hunt jam comments

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As is common with many stories submitted in this jam, this story needed more space so things could breathe.

A second draft would’ve helped some too, as there were some grammar and spelling errors throughout.

Despite that, I had a really good time. Great story to start off with, nice twist at the end, and exquisite artwork.

Thanks for the feedback.

I checked through it a few times, it's written in American English but there shouldn't be any spelling errors? :o

I'm really glad you liked the twist. I was afraid people would think it was weird. <LOL>

All mess ups are homonyms.

Steal instead of steel, pray instead of prey, etc.

Technically spelling, but it’s something spellcheck can’t catch.

Homonyms are annoying like that.

Thanks. That's how they slipped through the spell checker.
I'm really sorry about that. That's really stupid of me. That's a bit embarrassing :")

Thanks for pointing it out. I'm really going to have to watch that next time.

Oh, no worries.

I got called out in my story for a confusing use of the word “beings”.

We all can improve; that’s why we enjoy these events!