I cared for Captain Arrago. He seems like a good dynamic character. Beras’ was a good foil to him. Using havoc brothers against battle brothers is a good idea that seems underutilized. I commend you for using battle brothers; it is a hard faction to write about. The TV thing made of iron filings was a fun idea. It was slightly confusing who they were being attacked by in the first part of the story but cleared up by the end.