I feel like there is a good story here, I am just not the target audience. I had a hard time reading this, I would suggest reading it out loud next time during editing to assist with how it flows. I do appreciate this was fun and not what I normally read.
Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment.
It was designed to be an opposite in almost every way conversation. With the Orcs communications leaning into the more absurd and the Starhost being wildly amused.
this is the first of these jams I have ever done and in total transparency this ended up being a very busy weekend and I didn’t realize how much I was going to need to do to get a passable story board.
Still thou thank you for the consideration especially considering it’s not ur type of content, it takes substantial more effort to have something to say when that is the situation.