I really liked the writing style! Great read. The last part feels a bit disconnected, but overall this is nothing short of great.
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That's a fair note. I was experimenting with using strict first person, and wanted to take advantage of the ability to address the reader directly. In narrative, that was supposed to be the Guild Leader reporting to the other Dwarven Guilds, but I did a bad job of exposing that to anyone who isn't already in my head ;-