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After the first draft, I had to either cut parts of the actual story or the prologue that explained the context. I decided that i'd rather keep a more fleshed out fight but yeah, the orcs arrival is now a little to sudden for my taste, too.

great read. Instant respect for this rat-ogre and his code of honor. Loved the "were it one on one, i would have let you die"- line

I really liked the writing style! Great read. The last part feels a bit disconnected, but overall this is nothing short of great.

really liked your humor! Some things are a bit abrupt, but i guess thats mainly due to the word limit. Great Job!