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Was a fan, though it probably could’ve used some more editing.

Main error I saw was jumped from past tense to present tense too much. It made it somewhat confusing.

Had a good time, though.

thank you for taking time to comment.
that is a super helpful thing to point out. Thank you. It was made in a rush but I didn’t notice(obviously ) that I had done that.

Hey, it’s a simple mistake I used to make all the time.

And despite that, it was still a fun story! That means something for sure!

thank you for taking the time to comment.

The tense gets me if I am honeet I have some dyslexia and a sprinkling of adhd and I just dident have as much time as I would have liked.  I turned it into an audio drama that is live on TikTok and premiers on YouTube tomorrow lmao. 

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Make sure to link the YouTube Link on discord so we can check it out tomorrow!

I posted it just now in the one page rule, writing jam thank you for having any interest in it all actually