Music and art was good, I liked sad Satori.
The writing had a few bugbears of mine: Filler sentences like "she sensed malice in the air", burly detective syndrome stuff like calling Satori "the mindreader" or calling mamizou "the pseudo-avian".
This is just something that stuck out to me but, I read Aya and Mamizou's dialogue as like, American Southern? They had a certain air to their dialogue that read that like. Mamizou's "yers" and shortening of every -ing word.