Glad you liked it even though it's not quite your thing. (that means I succeeded at something at least lol)
In truth it's not actually nfsw it's more like pg13 ( I just put the pg16 to warn folks)
if I were to say I have an audience it's people that like anime, like dragon ball with it's master roshi, Yuyu Hakusho with it's main character, or FLCL with it's everything.
If it's not something you are already into/familiar with then it probably comes off as poorly written fanfiction lol, which it pretty much is.