I really liked the way that you integrated the story into the game, and the turning point was also really cool, after a while I decided to just try going back and it made me feel smart, so great job! I will say though, the run back got pretty boring, it would be nice to have a shorter run back, or to have some sort of distance indicator, just to avoid the thought that it's endless. I actually did think it was endless after a while and had to read the spoiler to figure out that no it's not endless, you just have run all the way back. But overall a pretty good game, and I definitely enjoy the story, although I would have liked more time to read the messages, running past them made it hard to read them all.
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Hey, really appreciate the detailed feedback! I agree completely that the gameplay gets quite repetitive and boring after a while. It was rather late in testing that it set in and there wasn't really much time to add more substance to the gameplay. I think your idea of having a distance indicator to indicate that there indeed is a goal is brilliant! Definitely putting that on the top of my to-do list if I ever get around to further work on this game. Thanks for playing the game!