Well, I actually think it's interesting that there are multiple entrance choices, but I agree that maybe one of them should be more prominent.
Let's see, confusing bits... Hmm, re-reading this, I can only find one. Or else I understood it better the second time LOL
"Disembodied shadows hide among the trees. They get excited by the sweet scent of fruits, beware."
Wait, so they're always excited? It looks like all the trees have fruit.