The map is beautiful and the rooms are very imaginative and interesting. I think the hook is somehow a weaker side but I still would like to go there and explore this strange creature
I love the weirdness of the adventure, the map is fantastic (I also appreciate how the entry points are so clearly marked!). The room descriptions give enough to go on, but leave room to get creative. I think having a little bit stronger hook is the one area I might try to add something, even though I think for the right party the "here's something new let's go explore" route might be enough.
This ship is so bizarre and beautiful! I would love to hop into a spaceship and try to research it with my colleagues. Mapping it would be another great challenge during session :D
While some bits were mildly confusing at first, and the hook is a little weak, in general I'm 110% in awe of this. Also, I'm a sucker for alien biotech of this sort.
Hey, I'm glad you like it! and thank you very much for the feedback, it's super useful. I also think the hook is vague, it ended up being an open scenario rather than a fully defined adventure. I'm really interested in your feedback so I can improve the weak parts: Which part was confusing to you? IMO, after the introduction, it's not clear where to start the adventure.
Haha, honestly, I don't even know what these shadowy beings are. Maybe they get excited if you open a fruit? That could be a funnier way to put it in the description.
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The map is beautiful and the rooms are very imaginative and interesting. I think the hook is somehow a weaker side but I still would like to go there and explore this strange creature
I love the weirdness of the adventure, the map is fantastic (I also appreciate how the entry points are so clearly marked!). The room descriptions give enough to go on, but leave room to get creative. I think having a little bit stronger hook is the one area I might try to add something, even though I think for the right party the "here's something new let's go explore" route might be enough.
I'm loving the illustration and the descriptions! The idea of a living, organic vessel has fascinated me so it's nice to see someone try the idea out.
Incredible and beautiful; I am super inspired by the art and descriptions.
This ship is so bizarre and beautiful! I would love to hop into a spaceship and try to research it with my colleagues. Mapping it would be another great challenge during session :D
While some bits were mildly confusing at first, and the hook is a little weak, in general I'm 110% in awe of this. Also, I'm a sucker for alien biotech of this sort.
Hey, I'm glad you like it! and thank you very much for the feedback, it's super useful. I also think the hook is vague, it ended up being an open scenario rather than a fully defined adventure.
I'm really interested in your feedback so I can improve the weak parts: Which part was confusing to you?
IMO, after the introduction, it's not clear where to start the adventure.
Well, I actually think it's interesting that there are multiple entrance choices, but I agree that maybe one of them should be more prominent.
Let's see, confusing bits... Hmm, re-reading this, I can only find one. Or else I understood it better the second time LOL
"Disembodied shadows hide among the trees. They get excited by the sweet scent of fruits, beware."
Wait, so they're always excited? It looks like all the trees have fruit.
Haha, honestly, I don't even know what these shadowy beings are. Maybe they get excited if you open a fruit? That could be a funnier way to put it in the description.
Beautifully illustrated! A ship dungeon that is - quite literally - alive with wonders and terrors.