This is amazing!! I would love to have you translate our other visual novel (originally Chinese to English so we would like English to French) but I can't see to check out. Would you share a link for checkout?
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WOO! Congratulations!! I found the Steam link, putting here so it's easy for anyone else who reads this. :)
https://store.steampowered.com/app/3139760/The_Long_Road_Home/
This is a cute little game. I love the graphics. I can tell a lot of love and hard work went into this game! Great job!!
Unfortunately, when I moved the window, my screen capture stopped so that bums me. Thankfully Mayshing grabbed a clip, otherwise I would have nothing to show for the play.
https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea/clip/UninterestedObservantButterPeanutButterJellyT...
I did get a little bored but I'm a Leeroy Jenkins, test the boundaries and kill everything kinda gal. So this game is probably not really for me. It is very cute and I can see a lot of people liking it. Reminds me of the little pets people used to feed on their desktops. So I think a LOT of people would love this!
Keep up the great work!😊
Streaming soon!
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https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea
Hi, we are streamers for FeedBackQuest7, would you send us 2 keys please? One for @Oswinclankk and one for myself. Thank you.
Feel free to send me a key on Steam:
https://steamcommunity.com/id/amorlea/
And Oswinclankk here
https://steamcommunity.com/id/10292929393/
You will notice I gave 5 stars across the board because this game is fantastic. I have some minor suggestions but they do not detract from the games play-ability or replay-ability.
I suggest shorter turn based plays. As of this moment, you have 100 plays and it's too long all at once. I can't recall, but I believe the average is 3 turns per side. Then maybe add a CG, some dialogue inbetween the 3 plays.. just a bit to break it up.
I am so bummed that I forgot to hit record so the only thing I managed to catch from my stream was the lively chat which I hope you will enjoy as the viewers were really into this game.
Everyone agreed we need a pronunciation guide (perhaps under settings) or at the very least initially a pronunciation for each name. Like, "Eleni (ehl-leh-nee)" etc.
Also, the skills need a label and description.
Otherwise bravo and I'm looking forward to more!
https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea
Just streamed Ark's Legacy and it was fantastic but forgot to record. Omg...
What I loved about this game:
NGL - this game was awesome. As simple as it was, I freaking LOVED the dialogue. It was hilarious. Sarcasm, game culture references... just awesome. Not boring or slow, perfect pace.
What I didn't like about this game:
- I had no idea how to play it really. A skippable level zero that gives a short tutorial would be helpful.
- The music was a little redundant but I can see that being solvable.
- The graphics weren't bad! So I can't complain there.
I would and will play this game again. I hope y'all put out a kickstarter. I'd like to see funds raised to hire an artist and music.
Bravo!
You can find and follow my twitch here:
I streamed this game on 9/20/2023 via Twitch.
You can find the VOD on Youtube here:
What I liked about this game:
- It has replayability. I found myself wanting to play it again and again just to improve how long it took to lose. XD
What I didn't like about the game:
- The graphics are a bit grainy but it's not bad.
- There needs to be a skippable level 0 that gives you a tutorial.
You can find and follow me on Twitch:
https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea
The things I love about this game:
- The backgrounds are pretty
- The sounds / ambiance is AMAZING!!
The things I don't like about this game:
- The story reads like an ad for the public transit system. Now, perhaps the person writing it. Really, really loves public transportation. And who am I to knock that? But I suggest adding a co-writer or hiring a writer to liven up the dialogue and speed up the storyline. It is just a bit too detailed and dry right now.
What I think would benefit this game:
- Adding sound volume control to the UX under settings
- Adding speed control to slow down or speed up the auto read function of the text.
For those who love to read, love visual novels and perhaps Canada or transportation, you will really love this game. Overall, I give it 4 stars.
You can see my demo plays here:
Part 1 -
Part 2 -
You can find and follow me on Twitch here:
About to Stream play test Niv Fish
https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea
I'll be streaming here! Schedule undetermined, but I plan to update before each stream.
https://www.twitch.tv/amorlea
Oh wow.... I'm unsure why but YouTube is hiding the videos.
There is no explanation. Just that it's unavailable. But I streamed the entire demo. It was uploaded as two different vids to my YouTube channel. And yes, each character's name having a different color, might help the eye to pick up a visual cue as to the character dialogue changing.
INCREDIBLE. This is hands down my favorite game to have played on Feedback Quest. I am looking forward to more. It is very polished. The only issue we had was streaming, I'm unsure what is causing it not to show up in the gameplay window. But I suspect it has something to do with windowed vs fullscreen. Because the initial loading screen does show up but then the menu disappears. I also noticed later there was a faint rushing audio which I originally thought was our air conditioner but it was from the game. If that is at all helpful in isolating the problem, I'll be happy to have helped! Otherwise, incredible and I'm a fan already.
Amazing. Typically it's easy for me to find flaws but I had a hard time finding anything that needed work. If I were to give one suggestion, I sometimes got lost when the characters changed. Maybe change the color of the character's names? I'm really grasping at straws because it's near perfect.
I support y'all and looking forward to the finished product! Keep up the excellent work!