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Thank you! My interpersonal insight was ten points too low. That hurts lol but at least now I know what the issue is.

This isn't a bug and may have been addressed already (either in the threads or in the planned GUI update) but if not: I think it would be great to either add a back button that is still accessible in choice screens or to make the last seen text remain visible during choice screens (I believe there is at least one instance of this during final negotiations). When using skip mode, it sometimes ends up that you don't remember what question you're answering and since you can't use "back" or see the previous text anymore, you have to panic sift through your memory, make your best guess, or reload and not use the skip or try to catch it just before the choice shows up. Small thing, but would be a big quality of life improvement since skip is so important in a game of this length and complexity.

I'm missing something about allying with Avalie and I can't figure out what it is. I've seen both weaver scenes listed on the wiki, found an additional one in the forbidden wing in week six (that implied I was missing something but ??? what?), seen several secret scenes involving Avalie (that aren't listed in the weaver chain), and seen the garden scene with Cato and Falon. I've got high friendship, respect, and rivalry with her; I've used (to my knowledge) all the right dialogue options. Are there more weaver scenes? I have replayed this game so many times at this point just to ally with Avalie and I still haven't done it. Pls help lol

That makes sense! And I'd love to; I have some editing experience if you need a resume/references. I'll be keeping a list in the meantime just to have some of it to hand.

Unrelated to that, I've just realized that the calendar still only goes to week 3; is that intentional? 

Seconding the above comment about tense shifts. I've noticed this too and was just about to ask if it was something you wanted us to point out as I'm not sure how finalized the script is. There's also a few instances of perspective shift where the narration switches from "you" to "I" (and not in the way that seems intended when there are genuine shifts in the narrator), as well as typos. I'm happy to make a running list as I encounter them but since there's so much still to add with the other routes and backgrounds, I wanted to know how useful that information would really be to you at this time or if it would be better to wait until you've got the script as finalized as possible.