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thank you so much! I haven't done creative while in a while, and one problem I felt that I've always had were run-on sentences. 

sorry 😅 i wanted to imply that a ritual where they would become one with the machine, as the vinci scholar was so exited to be.

woah I really enjoyed this one! and the poems are weaved masterfully! Good job!

The moment where the saurian explained his plan, was such a cool aha! moment.

Thank you! Although them being a "golem tribe" was actually an erroneous assumption by Xochi, in reality they are the Me'kah creations of the axolotls

even though you had to strain yourself, I do think you still did a pretty good job at connecting the climax with tidbits from the rest of the story.

woah, that took a bit of a turn, although with a great creative use for the pen!

love the use of the lore from the vinci faction book! I don't think I can get enough from reading all about the Vinci in whatever they may be doing, and it seems like you too would've benefited in having more space to write in to get a fuller ending.