My comment came out a little hash on the reread. And really I should add more detail.
When killing things, I couldn't see what was going on. I got murdered by hidden bullets. Shrinking the size, number or life span of the effects would really help
I like the look of the game the robot people who kinda look human work in this style of setting. The environment looked really nice and I could tell you really spent sometime working on it.
I couldnt really figure out where to go. I did go inside the strip club but missed what they where saying due to the camera angle . The movement felt really slippy too, like we where walkin on ice.
A little feedback was you might want to change the text color for the main character, sometimes I found it hard to read with alot of the blue backgrounds. I know you where short on time, but I feel the hints would of worked better if they where on a flag system or you can ask questions about how and what you need to know about
It seems quite a few people get stuck on the red dress. Normally I put everything into a Design Doc so the spell check grabs them, this one was a little bit more ad-hoc so I failed to catch some spelling mistakes. Once the jam is done then I will go back and fix it.
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Dirty dress - > water ¬> clean dress - > straw ¬> frog - > poster -, > rope