The original draft gave a description of her placing the trap as she escaped back into the basement but it went over to the next page and spoiled the surprise, so I edited it out.
I felt giving the exposition quickly required 3rd person perspective and it would have been strange to suddenly switch to first person, so I kept 3rd all the way through.
Thank you so much! Yeah I would have liked to give proper indentation and spacing but the template wouldn’t fit the story that way. I appreciate you pushing through that though, and I’m glad you enjoyed it.
