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Congratulations on your first gamejam! 

I think you did great and I hope you continue making games in the future! 

I think the only thing I would have wanted to see would be some story elements to tie into the narrative fiction theme. Even subtle things would have been nice like idle lines from our character that hint at a larger world, or maybe some texts that trigger on item pick up, but besides that, this was a great first jam, and it's awesome you managed to get it done on your own! 

Good job!

I love this game! I'm only a couple of days in, but there's just so much to do! The art is really charming, and the music matches really well. I think the characters are all really interesting and unique so far, and I can really feel the amount of care you put into this project. 

It's definitely a slower game, but it really adds to the tension and makes me feel like I'm in the same stir-crazy situation as the characters. 

Awesome work!!!

I really enjoyed the game! The runner/auto scroller genre is super underrated. 
I think a few small drawings next to the initial tutorial instructions would help clarity, but besides that it was a very fun game! 

Awesome work! 

I really like the game! The art assets were all very cute, and the black text screens were hilarious. 

I cant wait to see the game in its final version! Justice for Dan and his cards! :D

Thank you!
WinterIris did a great job designing the characters for us while I did the backgrounds. We are both very glad to hear your support!

Thank you for your review! Everyone on the team worked very hard and we are glad you enjoyed our game!

Thank you for your comment, I completely agree with your suggestion and I’ll try to have it added to the Itch page. 
I’m glad that you enjoyed the game otherwise!

Thank you for your support!
Everyone on the team worked very hard and we are super happy that you enjoyed the game.
I’m  very flattered that you liked the credit song! It was the only piece of music I composed for the soundtrack, and I didn’t think anyone would notice it specifically. (^▽^;)

Thanks again for your awesome review!