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the bucket with rope is op 

我接下來會以個人母語的語感，還有余光中的翻譯指南〈論中文的常態與變態〉等文來提出修正，若有冒犯敬請見諒。整個遊戲的多數描述都存在基本的標點符號問題，連貫的兩句子間應該用逗號或分號，但你幾乎全用了句號。

馬克杯的介紹「甚至不是半空的。一滴水都沒有」很奇怪，中文一般會把主語如「這杯水」或「這杯子」強調出來，而且連結詞使用不當，語意也不對，更自然的說法為「這杯裡的水別說一半了，連一滴都不剩」。

「這朵花即將死於脫水」明顯來自英文未來式「will」的僵化翻譯。日常生活沒人會說「這個人即將死亡」，而是「快死了」或「要死了」。紳士畫的描述「你願意為將死的紳士落幾滴淚嗎？」有同樣的問題。

比起「你的靈感已死。此處陳列著她的棺材」，我會傾向用「你的靈感死掉後，這裡便成了其棺材的安放處」，後者去除了英文現在完成式的做作感。

「一扇隱藏的門。鑰匙在哪裡呢？」，「鑰匙」前面應該加「但」以強調語意轉折。

「鏡子裡倒映出你的樣子。你因失眠而無比憔悴」，兩句子有連貫，而且主詞都是「你的樣子」，所有應改成「你的樣子倒映在鏡子裡，是副飽受失眠而憔悴無比的面容」。

「牆上寫著甚麼。看不清楚」，請直接去掉句號，「牆上寫甚麼看不清楚」

「就像關燈一樣，關掉這個念頭」讀來拗口，不如「就像關燈一樣，把念頭關掉」自然。

「她的眼淚如美酒般流淌」中的「流淌」是動詞，但因句子裡的位置而被當形容詞用了，應分成兩句成「她的眼淚如美酒般，流淌而出」才符合詞性。

拿水澆花的描述「澆過水。被拯救。仍然活著」完全不知所云。

「這是很久以來你第一次想出了一段旋律」，「這是」完全來自英文「this is」，「一段旋律」的「一段」來自英文不定冠詞，兩者其實不需要出現在中文。我的解讀是主人翁過往的生活充滿旋律，雖然之後暫時想不起來，但最終還是想起了，所以我會改成「過了這麼久後，你腦海裡終於再次響起了旋律」。

鋼琴的描述「終有一天，她會重獲新生」，是「總有一天」。

nice to see you on itch.io, will you upload your other games here?

when two people are having conversation, it's annoying that i have to constantly look at the name section on the upper left of dialogue bubble, there are more elegant ways to show who is talking, like assigning different text font or color to different character's dialogue, or just make the non-talking character's portrait fade out.

another bug is that, when i press Windows + Shift + S to screencapture, then directly paste it on any text area, trying to post it would show error below, despite i can view it with no problem on draft mode

i am using win10 latest chrome on computer, both these bugs occurred everywhere on the site, including game rating, comment section and community post  

first part show what normal zhuyin typing should be like, while second part is where i typed the exact same order like first part . you can see when the "space bar", which is for first tone, is pressed, entire words was gone

everything is just too slow, from movement speed to jump speed and falling speed

another thing i can't bear is that some stage will feature screen shaking during the middle of my jump landing

got ice bow in the first few levels, basically easy win till the end, can freeze everything except the last boss on level 18, but i could still kite that boss with enough haste 

too much exposition at the start, would prefer a brief cuttscene for background and character relationship,  and a codex that include every proper nouns

i can't believe there is a 3rd ending, i like this game even more now!

would prefer the chinese translation done by people who really know chinese, rather than google translate

crypt key unlock this door, and can help you acquire the third orb

too many game-breaking bug, can't even finished the game :(

was stuck on first level, because i clicked the "going right arrow" when i was on the swing, door demon never showed up

after i retry, still stuck after i entered cave and meet the demon

if this game isn't that focus on rng, it might be better

feel like vampire survivors

game crash for no reason :(

i am holding left button to stick to wall the whole time, but after i press right button once, my character jump a 1/4 arc instead of normal 1/2 arc, stuck in mid-air briefly, then change foot direction to the ground

still able to beat this game anyway, then the game breaking bug occur, rip me

really hard to understand how this game work

you clear right side of house first, next you try to move two healer house to the right as well,

browser version is broken on this level cuz virus won't move, only download version work properly

there is a bug on "twogether" level, if chacter  keep moving left, it can be out of bound

can't launch the game on chrome with win10. i don't have any extension installed

thanks, btw is level 15 in "redirect" really solvable?

it would be much appreciated if there is walkthrough for most of your games

bug report:character moving trace disappear around this area, is this intention or bug?

how do i even finish the first level?

demo is oddly satisfying

wahat is the purpose of logs?

just curious if this game has an ending?

will any new thing come out after bird?

game crashes when i let one house enter the exit with virus behind

i think "odd one out" is impossible

i think level 23 is impossible

after i repoen the game from zip, i can't move my character, only space bar(suicde) works

i am on VoxelCardGame public Alpha 1.0.1.zip

game froze after i killed this enemy

this game will hurt your hand

bug repoet: i always fall off the edge when i teleport to that position

bug report: i can't died

enemy floated at air won't come down

dead enemy can still deal damage to me

enemy encounter too frequent, like every 3 seconds, wtf?

second ending seems impossible :(

really wanna see the ending when all coins are collected

someone said there are 9 coins, but i only found 8 :(