Nice! Enjoyed the colour palette and the concept. Faster move speed would have made it a bit more exciting imo along with some music/sfx (totally get this was a time constraint thing). Also would have been good to know whether I was near death or not, so a health bar would help! Nice job :)
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Really enjoyed this! Lovely art style. That intro got me immersed into the world very effectively (great example of when/how to use music for narrative). Overall I enjoyed the whole show don't tell aspect but it did mean I was slightly confused when I encountered the dotted power line and couldn't progress further because I'd come at it the wrong direction. I restarted thinking I'd encountered a bug, but wouldn't have been so hesitant if I'd had a hint or something (maybe a 'caution' sign or something to indicate you were encountering something new?) Anyway, had fun and thought it has lots of potential :)