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great read. I love me some dwarves! 

Valid, it Probably suffered form a considerable cut to get it to the word count then again  into the template.   I was trying to keep the main ideas alive thanks for the comment!

Fun read. Loved the ending 

Well done, most people have a hard time writing  so absolutely in present tense but you stayed consistent  all the way through. 

Well done, a good read. 

Hi, just wondering if you had more contracts planned? And maybe a revision of the oracles to add little twists to the different barriers (maybe that would be a hard mode oracle lol)

thanks for the kind words! Yeah, the end was kind of a cheeky little nod to the theme that maybe it wasn't about her plans not going according to plan and it was about his. I admit I was writing it between shifts and probbly didn't give it the editing time it deserved.

haha clearly I missed the perfect image for my mood board

Thanks for the read

The idea was that soulsstealers in opr are psychic and slowly corrupt their targets through subtle influence that grows over time. So the idea was the job was given and the snatcher was working on the leader, when the leader would check the hooch it would push on his mind to make him see regular stuff. Over time it keeps pushing him to one more job, even past where it's safe or smart,and giving the infected "booze" to his trusted people, and is strengthening its hold to the rest of the gang. Soul snatchers are also bio-specialists that modify their followers so I thought them importing alien matter to help the conversion along would make sense. Charles only sees it at home becouse she's not a higher up and the alien never anticipated her getting it so soon, so when she goes home and pours it into a glass instead of drinking it out of the bottle like Baz suggests the alien isn't aware enough of her to push her to see regular booze. 

I guess maybe I was working from some assumed knowledge of the setting and should have tried to clarify more. Hope that helps!

awsome!!

the goblins are orc mauraders (goblin tanks unit) the swarm is a bot swarm (robot legions) and the spider walked at the end is just a scaled up robot legions spider walker. 

Glad you had fun reading it!

go for it that would be great let me know when it's up!

thanks! I hope people can see past the bad formatting, my computer did not like those templates. Hope to have it sorted by the next jam(this is my first). I started reading the billion suns rules a few weeks ago!