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OPR Jam 8 - Time is Money's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concept & Originality | #1 | 4.478 | 4.478 |
| Overall | #10 | 3.797 | 3.797 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #18 | 3.348 | 3.348 |
| Flow & Clarity | #22 | 3.565 | 3.565 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Clever! I liked it!
Absolutely loved this, especially how the Dwarf Guilds were presented. Copying what some others said, could have used better clarity when it came to who was speaking and when, but it wasn't difficult to figure out.
Interesting interpretation of the theme. I appreciate that it's not the POV character who's in this terrible predicament.
Sometimes not making another paragraph when a different person is speaking was indeed jarring somewhat. However, not too much. I could infer who was talking when, but perhaps more clarity is called for.
I enjoyed this submission a lot, can't wait to see what else you do!
Nice flavor. Enjoyed the banter. was a little confused in the last few paragraphs.
Gotta make a profit somehow!
so glad you submitted this, it was a great read, no worries on the formatting, a lot of personality here with the assessor program constantly updating!
I love the ruthless nickel and diming. It reminds me of the setting of the game A Billion Suns. Definitely worth looking at if you enjoy this story.
thanks! I hope people can see past the bad formatting, my computer did not like those templates. Hope to have it sorted by the next jam(this is my first). I started reading the billion suns rules a few weeks ago!