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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #1 | 4.519 | 4.519 |
| Overall | #1 | 4.185 | 4.185 |
| Adherence to Theme | #2 | 4.185 | 4.185 |
| Flow & Clarity | #8 | 3.852 | 3.852 |
Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I narrated your short here;
awsome!!
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Great fun, I want a Gribble sculpt!
Very fun and characterful, enjoyed this one a lot!
Oh yeah, that was some good fun!
Not absolutely sure which factions these are all supposed to represent, but I had a great time with this story.
the goblins are orc mauraders (goblin tanks unit) the swarm is a bot swarm (robot legions) and the spider walked at the end is just a scaled up robot legions spider walker.
Glad you had fun reading it!
Gotta love gobbos and their "tanks". It was a fun story that was a good combo.
Hoping to eventually hear about what ideas the pair and their little 'Ducks' come up with!
This was a fun read. I like Gribble and Ratchet. I think that it would be fun to have a longer story with them and their new found bot swarm friends.
Very good!
I liked your story. I'm going to read some in a video or stream. If I do any objection if I read yours?
go for it that would be great let me know when it's up!
Green iz best! And SpazzFragg's noo storee iz besterer! Bestest? Woteva. G(r)ibble and Ratchet befrienderize the best possible friends that aren't the usual kind of green, and have a kitbashing adventure. Love it. Buddy power over 9000!
Loved it.