Okay good! Thought I would give you a heads up. On stage five, the milking image goes missing
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Okay, so the game runs so much better that I physically skipped level 5 and went to level 6 on accident because due to how I am playing the game. Which lead me to another dialog error in the dancing rpy file.
I think it was during level four, but not 100% sure. The word "The" was partially missing, the letter "E" specifically.
So, I decided to reset the game just so I can actually take my time with it.
No, I mean it won't port saves from an old renpy update to a current one.
As for the placeholder, you should have just went with the futa; then just worked the camera angle differently. Or, put in an option in the game that lets you choose what is the person's preference.
Then make two or three different versions, depending on the choices you place and go from there. It can be right at the very start of the game, right before you put in your characters name.
I'm saying that because the placeholder makes it look like the game is unfinished to an extent. I'm not trying to be rude and hurt your feelings or anything, just honest.
Either way, the game has come a very long way! From questionable and shaky at moments, to enthralling and enticing. I'm excited for whatever changes and updates you make! :)
But, on another note. I see you took my suggestion! I can now play your game wherever I go, as I can play it on my phone! As an added bonus as well, I can now view the pictures at anytime which is a huge help!
Other than that, I did not find any other bugs than the one with I had mentioned earlier. The game itself runs more decently than before, despite the dialogue issues. Although, I do have one gripe with the save system.
The saving system doesn't port your old saves, and I am not sure if the old saves will work with newer versions of your game. But, the saving system itself has improved MASSIVELY! So, I'm not complaining too much.
But, I am bummed out that you got rid of that exploit. No matter though, as it just means gotta be tactical about my choices when I play your game! I do hope that you eventually add an actual NPC other than this place holder during the sex scene. Looking forward to new updates!
If you want, I can give you some suggestions about the fourth route. I read that you were having problems with coming up with more puzzles and such. For example, burn the heart.
Everyone starts freaking out, thinking that they have to kill one of them; when in all actuality it means burn a heart shaped locket that you find in the back pack. I don't mind helping.
If you do make a fourth route, have it be focused on Anne but keep the ending; I liked it as its perfect for a suspenseful ending!
If you need help coming up with ideas for that, then let me know and I can help with that as well! I'm a writer in my spare time.
I played the update, and things look promising so far! I read that you are fixing the save mechanism... FUCKING FINALLY!!!!!!!! ITS SOOOOOOOOOOO ANNOYING HAVING TO DUMP NEEDLESS AMOUNT OF CASH INTO YOUR BOOBS JUST TO GET BACK TO WHERE YOU WERE BEFORE YOU TURNED OFF THE GAME!!!!!
Also, are you gonna post all the scenes eventually?
The game has potential, and a very good graphics despite some of its short comings; which I will list below.
(1)The bottom of the screen is cut off, so you can't click everything below a certain point; without having guess where the button is located.
(2)The loading and saving mechanic needs to be reworked, so that it can load up your entire progress; and not your stats. Unless, the player knows what they are doing and knows how to exploit the system itself.
(3) Stats are not viewable in The Lounge area, and the only thing that is viewable is the amount you can charge per dance.
(4) There needs to be a game gallery of your hard work! You have no idea how difficult it was for me to even TRY to dig through the files of the game.
(5) There needs to be a very strong story narrative. I get it, the game is still in the pre- pre- alpha phase; so there might be one in the works!
(6) I am going to recommend that you switch to Ren'Py as a game engine platform, as there is WAY more access to different gaming platforms with it then Unity. Especially, since there are a lot of controversy surrounding the company that owns Unity. You can still keep the game as a PC only game if you switch to Ren'Py, and mobile users can play it ( with the emulator of course ); as that's how I play some of the "PC only" games.
(7) Side quests! There needs to be side quests along with the story!
(8) Being able to talk to the staff during your shift, and or talking to the owner!
(9) Different main character choices! More specifically, four different preset characters you can choose as your " Dancer " for when you first start up Matriarch.
(10) Being able to name your " Dancer " when you first start up the game.
Again, I do STRONGLY recommend that you swap over to Ren'Py. It may be easier for you in the long run. There is a person named Yuliya Kovach, who does something a lot similar and uses Ren'Py.