I really loved the opening, it was very sensual. I also enjoyed the flashback to the main character holding her baby, very soulful. Currently your game has a lot of bugs which could likely be fixed in 27 minutes. Depth sorting was a huge one, just in the starting house's living room, I ended up standing on all the furniture and tvs. Also, there was a tree near the entrance to the forest(right after the first crab) that wasn't depth sorting.
And sir, I don't know if you're aware, but jumping using Space allowed me to traverse past collisions and travel outside of the map boundaries. It was quite hilarious and fun. Also, during battle, if I pressed up or down, the screen would scroll up to the field screen.
And one last bug, after the flashback cutscene with the hot loincloth woman, there were 2 speech bubbles sitting out of bounds in that room. I used Space to jump over to them, and it got me stuck in an endless dialog loop with the loincloth woman. I only escaped using the escape key and jumping back.
It would be good to take precisely what you have right now and refine it into a diamond before proceeding any further. The game has good feels and atmosphere, which I value above all else, but it needs a prudent examination before these bugs get out of hand.