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Absolutely love the light piano work. The rumbling made me feel I was experiencing a massive creature trudge around in the other world (I thought this even before I read your brief about seeing a being so you definitely portrayed this well). Massive and terrifying, but careful and calm. With the piano as contrast to show its true nature.

The mix is great, and the piece really made me conjure the story in my head which is awesome. 

Great work!

Fun tune! Definitely getting the wacky vibe you were going for and some great movement through the piece with additions/subtractions of instruments. 

I would echo what some of the others have said with the mixing as some parts can feel a bit contrasting and don't gel as well together as they could, but seeing as you've already mentioned you're looking more into that, that's great!

Looking forward to hearing your learnings!

Really liked the ambience portrayed in your piece! Sound selection were great, (Especially love the pad at around 1 minute) but I think some stood out a bit too much against the underlying pieces. Such as the section starting at 2:40, where the the idea is great but could blend in with the prior section in a cleaner way. You set up a lovely space with the introduction of the synth at 2:24 and its little additions until 2:40 but the bell sound that comes in there seems a bit too distinct from the rest of it and felt a bit jarring. 

Each section is distinct with its own melody and vibe and serves to offer a point in the journey but would be great to hear a bit more about what they represent, and somewhat hard to link that back to the original prompt sometimes as it seems to be more focused on the lighthouse instead of the far reaches theme. 

All in all, great work with some minor nit picks, and would love to hear more!