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I'll help you out. "your are" should be "you're", "pleace" should be "please". Make sure to add " ' " to words.

The VN, was never 18+ the way you're thinking. A character had umf umf behind the scenes. Nothing shown, so stop acting like this was some Eternum show.

Comparing a game, and real-life actually makes sense in most cases. In the game, there is a relationship, in real-life there is a relationship... Now if I were to say, Rocket League has rocket-boosting flying cars playing soccer, why doesn't IRL have that? It's just obvious that there's a difference between reality, and not.

Hope you have a good one, vj13008.

He's just having a rough time I guess, gotta' project onto others.

Looking forward to seeing how the new models look in-game, i'm on edge simply to the fact i'm used to the previous already, but you'll be the first to use blender? That I know of.

Thank you for continuing your work, hope it's rewarding in some way.

It's a free game, so you got scammed how? You payed for a game that was free, that's your fault, you consented to purchasing, w/ no refunds. You're definitely just a child, because no adult acts this way, unless you want to put yourself as a "Karen". You're insulting the creator for not making it ero, and you're insulting me for telling you, you're a child, that just wants to wank his weewee. "What's the point of hearts, and flirting if there are no relationships?" It's the fact that in real life, you can say something to a person, and they could love what you say, and it made them feel good, WHILE NOT WANTING TO HAVE SEX WITH YOU. This is how I know you're a child, just because a "heart" shows up you think there's supposed to be sex? Just cause I meet someone on the street, and I say "Nice jacket.", and they like what I said, and on the top-left or right it put a heart up, it doesn't mean a relationship is going to start instantly, or at all. My heart pounds excitingly when I see my favorite musician play, my heart pounding DOES NOT MEAN I WANT TO F-! See yourself out lil' bro, don't like the story, that's fine man, but insulting the creator cause no umf-umf is crazy.

You're at least 12 years old, just hitting the puberty stage... you can't even spell correctly (EX: "lieing", "waisting") at least you can spell cuss-words. You have no idea what "boring" is, you're upset cause you couldn't get off w/ your pinky-size.

For those that're actually looking for a good AVN-VN, I do recommend this. Having the tag "Adult" doesn't mean sex, you're all children.

Lycoris Radiata has good story, unlike other AVN-VN's who focus entirely on ero-scenes. I understand everyone who wants to wank, doesn't enjoy learning about the female, before smashing, so you'll just -rep the AVN-VN for not adding scenes immediately.

"Boring, cause no sex." Ahh.

"I wanted to jack off, can't believe this shit was only story." Ahh. Fuck outta' here, ero dōjin is waiting for you.

When you pay attention to the bio: "The story includes NTR , but players have the option to avoid them."

Usually the Civic wins, but i've won here. Thank you @Sukebe.

@Ghryst blocked me. How will I ever strike back... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Also for those -1'ing. Continue sharing yourself w/ others girls, but get upset when they do it w/ others. Girls & Guys in real-life quite literally go on dates w/ many people at once (@dating-sites/apps), please get out of you room. It's not fantasy land.

You wouldn't pay if it was complete, so this comment is pointless. People pay to get early access, that's it. A lot will being making this "mistake" on this site again. Just like 1,000+ people are paying for Eternum. It's just an unfortunate situation.

Thank you for the VN you've built for our entertainment. Very grateful, please have a great Christmas (if you celebrate), and wishing a wonderful next year & more.

Thank you, Jazz. For the continuation, and the effort you've put in. Can't wait to play it, have a good Christmas (or any holiday, i'm ignorant.) if you celebrate.

I yet to know if the choices matter, but understand it just started, you're not going to know if they really matter. Also no one mentions the skip button because there is settings option to it, you're allowing it to skip unread content. If you want to skip, without missing anything, just tap skip periodically. You skip some dialogue, but nothing major.

Thank you for the continuation, very grateful for an amazing VN. Have a great Christmas if you celebrate.

Thank you, appreciate the update ♥.

Sandbox isn't random clicking, you're simply to dumb to know where to look & go. Eternum you're also clicking, but aye. There's a literal Sandbox in Eternum. (EX: Search mansion for clues, Wolves / Vampires, and more.) Go off though (Called me dumb, yet Eternum is part Sandbox).

I want to know what your problem is with using your fingers just a tiny bit, you know what they're for right? You're such a wuss you can't click on an icon, and *boom* story pops up. You'd rather say "This game is a Sandbox, be warned." You really warned everyone buddy.

You're truly missing out on many Visual Novels that're Sandboxes. DM me if you want recommendations.

You want to play a story? Suuure. You want to "play" for the story, yet you don't want to "play" for the story... Make up your mind. You click in both a normal VN, and a Sandbox. Go read a manga, manhwa, webtoon. You won't have to click. If you're only there for the story that is :)

You had your time wasted how? You downloaded to bust, but got upset about a little bit of clicking. Might wanna' go watch the hub instead of downloading VN's my guy.

You're playing a Harem VN, yet you hate sharing... HAHAHAHA! You're the one who is toxic.

Not sure what everyone is whining about, I understand the scene was removed... Yet, I literally didn't find anything horrible in this VN. Let's say there was "Cheating/NTR/Cucking.", you want to act like you're not doing that in the VN's you play? It's okay when you do it, but not others? That's some major double-standards.

@Gladerine, you make the VN you want. If you want a girl kissing another girl, do that. You can make the lesbian scenes optional, that's the best solution, of course it'll take some more coding, but it'll be easy enough.

This has massive potential, I could make an essay to show my appreciation, but there's no need. The models are good, the animations are good, and I think there is lots of room for growth in the story... many ideas come to mind like DOGMA, traveling across many worlds, meeting gods, etc.

Thanks for putting in your time & effort into this VN, it was enjoyable.

For a first VN it's definitely not bad, I know many people who are the same level as you, or even worse for their first one.

I think you personally did good for the limits that're holding you back. Less people, and assuming worse specs than other creators. I don't think you should feel down about this VN at all, that is if you do feel down about it. I like aspects about it, not many VN's you actually get to interact like fighting (reminds me of some steam war games), sure it lacks choices, but that takes so much more time than you probably have I assume.

If you continue, I may check it out when I have the time, and I wish you the best.

I can't say this was "outstanding", but it was  good in it's own-rite. Scenes in my opinion need animation, the VN in itself needs animation. Though it was fun to play to pass the time, the idea of a third-person battle was nice.

I think you have potential, and look forward to what's to come.

If you keep saying "fam", i'm going to find you.

I can't, more like wouldn't make a huge review like @Ralkey, but I overall agree w/ his review.

This Visual Novel has tons of potential, sound effects are wonderful, and the story is interesting, pulling you in... I can see you trying animations/scenes that aren't common. 3D animation, as the camera flying around the room, while also having a POV of a drone.

I really look forward to what you make in the future, but especially this VN. You've done well for the intro/first chapter.

Appreciate you making this VN, and wish you the best.

I've yet to play this VN, but you genuinely shouldn't worry about pumping out updates. That's not really how VN's usually go... There's always months of waiting, because it takes effort to make, not to mention like you said, personal problems.

The fact you even continue wanting to make updates is probably good enough for a lot of people. You go make your money man. 

I swear it's December. Feels like i'm being spoiled, been far to many updates from every creator recently.

Good update, Yoko ♥ supremacy as always.

Short, but an update is an update. Appreciate the continuation of the VN as always Odyssey.

Not sure if you're trying new angles, could've just forgotten... but Lym's scene felt like it had more effort put into than others if I recall correctly. Good work, TY.

I didn't expect much, honestly thought it'd be a boring NSFW VN (It is NSFW, but not boring... there's more imo)... 

When I first saw the pill that everyone takes, I instantly thought "We Happy Few". Made it feel more immersive to play.

I want to thank you for making this VN, cause it was honestly a fresh experience though, you could say it's not. This game has massive potential, and you have potential as a whole to create more VN's...

It was a fun 2 hours, wonder what our guy looks like behind the mask...

I will, and have been re-using old saves... I used up 50 mainly because I like everything organized, for EX: Every event, I save... Every-time I take a break, I put a save. Just a tiny bit addicted to saving apparently. Honestly forgot there was a gallery, and since there's no routes like you said, I shouldn't worry about saving like other VN's.

I assume this is your first game, and I have to say you've done a good job so far. You've got plenty of potential to create even better VN's later down the line.

As I write this response, I haven't finished, but will soon... I have a suggestion, well more like a demand cause it's needed... Add more save slots (Infinite if possible), i've ran out already w/out finishing the VN yet.

That's honestly the only complaint I have for this game. Anyways, thanks for creating this VN, hope you continue to update, and create more <3.

Rare occurrence when he doesn't say "fam". Let's mark this as history.

As much as I love(d) Re:Rudy, I am happy that you created something new/fresh.

I'm interested in the intro so far, nothing is to rushed. Saying this game has potential is an understatement since this type of VN has never been made, and your previous VN is already at the top of list.

I can't say the story is perfect, cause we don't have much to go on, but it's definitely headed in the right direction.

I know you're an amazing writer, but even so... I hope you stay genuine to the story & characters, even w/ the "constant scenes" to come.

As always, appreciate you for making VN's for our entertainment. I do hope you are successful now & in the future.

Looking forward for updates to come, thank' you Ekko. 

After playing 0.2, this has been amazing... On par w/ other Top VN's. Glad you haven't been rushing scenes w/ girls. Good choice. The story has been great, and the beach arc was relaxing, and wholesome. (Extra: Love you choosing Rock music for fighting scenes, and amazing cars.)

Looking forward to 0.2, thank you for creating this VN. I recommend playing "Oppai Odyssey". You could get some ideas, but drift off making your own w/ a concept of it.

Waited a-while for this game, I look forward to seeing how well you did. Always saw potential. Thank you for sticking w/ the game, don't know how well you're compensated for it. 

As I played through 0.1, I can say I am happy w/ it. It's going good so far for an intro, and it has plenty of potential. I worry though, I hope you don't follow in the same direction as "Oppai Odyssey". There's already a bunch of similarities in these scenes. I know it'll be hard to not be similar since he's done so many ideas, but hard not to comment about it. If you've played it, I am sure you can see it.

I haven't played 0.1 yet, but I have always been excited for this VN. Just from the preview of pictures you had, I could see that this had massive potential. I may, or may download 0.1 soon if I am free, I want to see if you saying it was a "flop" was correct.

Though I haven't played it just yet, thank you for putting your time/commitment into making this for us (me). Hope you get compensated in some way.