i've played this and i cannot figured out what i was supossed to do, 

i didnt like the graphics of the game, however the graphics in the pixelart section are nice, the hand well draws are well done the problem is more in like the fact that the world doesnt make sense at all, theres no coherence in it, l there are random objects everywhere and it makes it really ugly, also the flying world doesnt look good, i didnt understant why going in a magical portal in the wall lead to a batiment, or why going behind that batiment lead to the begginning of the game, also the textures moving for no reasons like the ground at the begginning of the game or the tyres

On the gameplay side, i didnt know what i was supposed to do, and roaming in the world was a bit boring because theres no ennemy, no platform, you're just walking and the only fun moment to do is the platform moment which is really short, i think you should add more gameplay elements like platforms or ennemies before giving it to test to peoples.

Anyway, i have made a game too and i would like to get feedbacks on it if you wanna try: https://kamigarp.itch.io/hkinspiredgame