Here's a list of some suggestions/notes that I made during my first playthrough. Hope it's helpful!

• "Maybe they weren't the one's dreaming" shouldn't have an apostrophe in "one's"
• Action text doesn't make it clear that Rook is wrapping his hand in a piece of the straight jacket (which would provide a cue for players to pick up the glass) (I missed what was going on due to this issue)
  
• "Yeah, you must of been one hell of a florist" should use "must have" or "must've" instead of "must of"
• In Shipping Log - 03, Occurrences of "operations" should be "operatives"
• After powering the forklift, its description still says it's on the floor
• Using the DE-C or the multi-tool on the vent feels like it should give specific lines since the crowbar does and says that a different tool is needed

Super helpful, thanks! :)

Here's a whole buncha miscellaneous typos.

• "voice.,"

• "take a peak"

• "your trapped inside" -> "you're trapped inside"

• "ananelgesic" -> "analgesic"

• "rightnow"

• "your keen on" -> "you're keen on"

• "here ?"

• "We've got a decent shot" -> "We've got a decent shot."

• "you clearly know what your doing" -> "you clearly know what you're doing"

• "monster's man"

• "consider the consider the"

• "everylast"

• "propoganda machine" -> "propaganda machine"

• "5-10 mintutes"

• "can't string a sentence together let" -> "can't string together a sentence, let"

• "We lost last months" -> "We lost last month's"

• "The aged machines grips"

• "it's motor"

I might duplicate one or two from the list above, but these are that I found:

• you're new best pal > your new best pal
• buereaucrats > bureaucrats
• you're head on a pike > your head on a pike
• humanities > humanity's
• you're missing > your missing
• ass shaped > ass-shaped
• consider the consider the
• had one for Akira: unless you're trapped, not sure if that was wrong or if that is what it should be.

Thanks guys, I've just pushed a new version with those fixes.