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A jam submission

Something is wrong.View game page

Fighting fate with household objects.
Submitted by TheAirHideous (@TheAirHideous) — 9 hours, 50 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#2823.5003.500
Fun#4643.2733.273
Theme#5113.4093.409
Game Design#6093.1823.182
Overall#8052.8942.894
Graphics#11492.3642.364
Audio#14171.6361.636

Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

In what way does your game fit the theme?
The game is inspired by Groundhog Day, Final Destination and the anime Another, based on dying and reliving the same scenario, hence rewinding.

Did you write most of the code yourself and made all the assets from scratch?
The writing and coding is entirely my own using Twine.

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Comments

Submitted

Not much of a fan of text-based games but this one got me, nice entry

Submitted

Haven't seen any other text based "choose your own adventure" games in this jam. Didn't mind it, but it is hard to rate "Graphics" for this. ...and without audio too.

Other than that, the design was well thought out and it was fun.

Could you please play and rate my game as well?

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-4/rate/723414

Submitted

Nice game! Was pretty tricky and I could maybe use a hint or two but maybe that is just me. Cool concept and interesting hook. Nice job with twine!

Submitted

The only complain I can have is that this game has no audio, but even still, I feel like it's complaining that books have no audio. Nice work all around, I wish we could see more games like that, there is so much that can be done that pure written media can't convey and your game showed it. I also loved the little text details (the blur, the outlines, etc). Really nice work, man!

Submitted

This was very unique because so far this the only text based game that i encountered

Submitted

Nice game, it was fun to have a mystery text adventure in the mix!

Submitted

Very atmospheric vibe in the game, and to have written so much in a week is such an awesome achievement! Been awhile since I played a text adventure game but this brought back memories of that time. Loved the text effects in the game.

Submitted

I liked your writing style even though it was scary, and animating some of the text was cool, made it feel more immersive :D Nice one!

Submitted

This is horrifying, nice writing!

quite interesting ,something is wrong with my game :)