Lovely art and concept! Looking forward to seeing more and playing it. The storyboards are immersive and insightful, giving a brief but captivating glimpse into the gameplay.

Lovely art and concept! Looking forward to seeing more and playing it. A quick suggestion is to maybe (if you have the time) think about why the mayor in this particular story chose to collect the stars to light the city in the first place. This may help give you more depth to the final conversation and the need to convince him. It can also help you guide the progression (like, maybe some of the other animals have their opinion about why the stars got stolen), leading to some possible reveal in the last conversation/ending.

Your art style is so cute and it does remind me of Night in the Woods, which is my favorite games. I also like your choice of tackling the issue of light pollution as that's an area of climate change I haven't really considered. My only critique is that I would like to see more about your development plan so I can get a better scope of how you plan on approaching your game in terms of development. Aside from that, you game looks cute and promising and I look forward to seeing your finished product.

The art is so cute and cozy!! I personally really enjoyed the storyboards and how they gave me a brief insight into the gameplay, giving me the opportunity to immerse myself as the main character in the game. I also love cute and cozy games to begin with so it found its target audience haha.

I know this is just the ideation stage but more system design would be nice to see implemented! 
I am very excited to see how this game turns out :)

I am loving the theme and idea behind this game. It is opening up my eyes to the effects of light pollution and how it affects the animals. I cannot wait to play this game.