Very good story writing, I didn't expect the game to unfold how it did and the animations communicated a lot more than  I expected they would. For a game with a lot of text it might help to choose a font that fits your style because I think it will elevate the visuals of the game a lot (and I think it can be done really quickly). 

Really powerful story, well done!

I really like how both of them talk, feels natural. The comment about cat videos which appears, when you look at the computer was really funny. The music could have been a little bit louder, and it was hard to see with wich objects you could interact.