My main issue is that it was quite hard to read, and for a visual novel that's pretty important.

Even though there's a black drop-shadow on the text, the actual text is white, and it's in a light grey box with a generally white/light background.

If you'd had the dialogue box a dark grey, the white text would have stood out better

I like how you managed to fit in these cute pixel art portraits of the characters on the tiny 240x160 resolution screen.

Good job!

Lovely game!

I laughed *hard* with the fixed point joke.

Shame that it is so short, I would like to play more of it.

If you don't mind, I have added your game to Butano's readme: https://github.com/GValiente/butano#also-made-with-butano

Confusing in a way that only a game like this could get away with. Also, the art is fantastic, you achieved everything I failed with my initial plan before I shifted to the roguelike.