This is a very interesting concept and I like the visualization with the writing. I think it may be helpful to have the actions during the walk phase be directly related to how many tiles you can move, that way you can't just skip directly to the end if you've already made the path. I also think adding some relevant ambient sounds to the tiles when you move to them would add a lot too. Like when you describe birds in the area, having some low volume bird noises along with the wind would be really cool.

Can't wait to see how it is next week!

It has some nice ambience to it and the description of the environment is interesting to read. I hope to see some imagery to accompany the text in the final stage of production.

Quite liked this. The writing really kept me engaged. I feel mixed about the gameplay itself. On one hand, it didn't really feel like my choices mattered -- as long as I placed tiles towards the goal, I made the same amount of progress whether it was meadow, river, or barrens -- but on the other hand, I did enjoy (whenever I had spare tile placements) just building the landscape, building a big continuous river, then putting meadows by the river, and eventually having the meadows transition into barrens, and I feel like making the gameplay itself more strategically demanding could pretty easily shatter that. I think with some nice art and music (and a bit more content!) this could be a very nice narrative experience though. I look forward to seeing the final version next week!

This is my favorite from the jam that I've played so far. Great writing and a super interesting and original concept.