Despite certain gameplay aspects that can be polished, I think this has a lot of potential and the atmosphere was actually pretty creepy and really well done. Also, the dolls were pretty disturbing

Really good work for your first game! Some things to keep in mind, however, are that it can be annoying to keep going back and forth over large distances, especially if you just add jump scares here and there. I feel if there was something stalking you that you had to hide from, it would add more tension to the game. Once I realized that nothing could harm me, for the most part, it was no longer scary. But still, not bad at all for a first game!

Not bad!! I like the atmosphere and Some of the jump scares startled me at first but gets a bit repetitive near the end.

It's a nice entry. And it's very good for the first game ever. Now you have experience how to make a game I encourage you to take a look at free game templates of fps game like https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/unity-learn-fps-microgame-urp-15... this one or even more advanced like this one https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/low-poly-shooter-pack-fr... you can use their code to make you game even more interesting. I think it will be good to have in-game menu, autosave, a bit work on character sounds will be great. Unity has problem of playing multiple sounds together it can slow down system pretty bad be careful with them.