I loved this. From the art to the music, it was high-quality work. I loved the movie cut scenes, I'd really like to know how to do those—looked like professional work. I'm really interested in the rest of the story and was looking forward to fighting that Dragon! Great job to your whole team.

That was pleasant and interesting. I found the last jump to be trusting, which, in this case, was beneficial to creating difficulty and challenging the player. I did not see a direct representation of collaboration, and visuals were heavily distorted because the game window was minuscule. For comparison, the PIP floating videos on YouTube are more significant than the game run on my PC.
I loved the music and the flow of the game. It hit the senses correctly. 
I leave impressed.

Thank you for sharing such a lovely project, and great job working to submission despite unexpected issues (there's always something!). Kudos especially for how well you melded sound with the animation, text, and visuals. Although the gameplay was short, I found myself especially charmed by your game's whole aesthetic and the ending scene. If you continue working on Starfall, I can't wait for the last scene to feel even more rewarding for the player! A nice feature to add might be a few more instructions on controls (the way you signaled using "e" to retrieve stars was very elegantly done).

While playing, I had a question about the visuals. When I first opened the game, the screen was quite small, and making the game fullscreen made it look pixelated (though I'm sure some of that is intentional). I wanted to ask what your ideal resolution is (or would be, with more time).

Turning to the story now, branching narratives are one of my favorite game features! How many different possible endings do you want to build in based on the dialogue choices made by the player character? And I appreciate that I already got to see different dialogue and consequences in just a few scenes :)

Regarding how the textboxes express the narrative, I have 2 pieces of feedback:

1. Some of the textboxes have dialogue a smidge too long to fit on the screen, so players can see a scroll bar on the side. However, we can't actually use the scrollbar, because the game controls interpret clicking as moving the dialogue box forwards, e.g. when the dragon says, "Let's get this little star back, eh [scroll bar]".

2. Some of the dialogue could have been separated more based on clauses/sentence structure, e.g. it seems smoother to divide up the following two textboxes like so: "And it's taken away the forest's" | "only energy source:"

Phew! Thanks for reading such a long review! My last piece of feedback: your audio effects are crazy good. The sudden vhoom when the griffon announces "...skyquake!", energetic music turning on when entering the dragon's lair, the ambient birdsong suiting the forest locale, the beautiful sublime music of the ending...incredible work.

Looking forward to seeing more!

Hey there! I feel like this game was meant to be a hybrid between an interactive story and a platformer but it didn't have much depth in either direction. The story was quite corny I feel like it would be better if you turned it into a comedy and made fun of yourselves, the characters, and the cheesyness. It also gave several dialog options but I bet the game doesn't have any branches it pretty much doesn't matter stuff happens the same way.

As for the platforming you only had one sequence of platforms and that was it... I mean... Maybe the stars could give you speed/height boosts? Maybe add some traps, enemies, and items? Maybe make it a race where you have to compete to see who gets to the stars first?

Anyway please don't feel discouraged and keep trying, I hope my suggestions help improve any future games you guys do.