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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Listenability | #5 | 4.214 | 4.214 |
Composing Quality | #10 | 3.929 | 3.929 |
Overall | #19 | 3.671 | 3.671 |
Execution | #22 | 3.429 | 3.429 |
Correlation to Project Description | #23 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
Overall Uniqueness/Creativity | #29 | 3.214 | 3.214 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Link to Streaming Service
https://youtu.be/9MkBB4Q164U
Description
A short, solo piano soundtrack composed in a (self-imposed) time constraint of about 5 hours to force myself out of creative block...
I also wanted to incorporate a motif from a previous soundtrack I composed to practice relating my compositions to each other in, for example, a game setting; I decided to use the main melody from "Reunion."
As always, feedback regarding the composition is greatly appreciated.
Sounds / VSTs Used:
LABS Autograph Grand
Screenshot of DAW
https://imgur.com/a/VpFH4KT
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Comments
Okay feedback time it is : Piano playing feels really robotic with the quantization, also the stacked chords on the left hands its all right but I think very basic you can change the voicing and open everything using two hands it will sound wider other than thats the harmonies works well its a nice pacing with two distinct section.
I love this submission! It has such a great anime feel to it and the emotion in the melody is palpable. Really beautiful :)
Lovely piano piece, really enjoyed it. I felt the section after 1:06, where the melody gets a bit more swingy, could've been enhanced with a few grace notes introducing some of the phrases.
I really enjoyed listening to this! Such a playful piece. Listening to it sounds like watching the credits of a very nice indie game.
I liked your use of accidentals throughout the track and the slight bpm changes were a nice touch.
I do believe that the chords take up a bit too much attention away from the main melody. Turning them down just a little bit would go a long way.
Well done.
Now that's a pretty little thing :)
If you'd have some more time to expand on that, I'd love to hear some harmony/contrapuntal line every now and then, to spice things up a bit. Also, jump from intro to main part seems a bit too abrupt, something to glue both parts together would be nice - even a simple glissando would do the trick, but there are dozens of ways you can go about that.
As for technicalities, I'd say that chords seem to be a bit too loud compared to melody. Maybe it would also be good idea to put them a little bit lower - they steal too much spotlight just because they are right in the mids. Having melody so high on the other hand is preatty nice - gives off more whimsical, christmasy vibes :D
I'm always a fan of simple piano pieces.