That was amusing! Loved those funny random lines that kept changing with fun references, love it when interactive stories find ways to make the most of this not being a printed book! :)
Great job!
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Her Divine Bust's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Story | #10 | 3.889 | 4.125 |
| Concept | #15 | 3.771 | 4.000 |
| Theme | #22 | 3.300 | 3.500 |
| Overall | #23 | 2.789 | 2.958 |
| Enjoyment | #24 | 2.828 | 3.000 |
| Audio | #27 | 1.296 | 1.375 |
| Graphics | #29 | 1.650 | 1.750 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Love the idea of switching between two points of view, but I don't know if Twine's the best to handle it. I got stuck once, then cheated to the end, but then immediately got stuck again. Regardless, the writing's good, and I especially like the concept of swapping around events and characters in the beginning of the heaven bit, even if they have no bearing on the story. Keep it up!
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Snow in SeptemberLovely writing! The story was captivating and the characters were very interesting. Some sound effects might be a nice atmospheric addition. :)
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