Play Story Concept
Yellow Submarine's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #11 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Theme | #15 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
| Overall | #15 | 3.310 | 3.310 |
| Concept | #16 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
| Story | #17 | 3.214 | 3.214 |
| Enjoyment | #18 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Graphics | #21 | 3.214 | 3.214 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I love this concept! I was really struck by the simple rain sound. It delivers so much atmosphere in just one little piece of audio. The story as you've laid it on in your design document sounds really intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this next.
Rain sound is calming and creates a nostalgic atmosphere somehow, glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for playing/reading! :)
Nice details in item descriptions. It really helped build the world and view the character's thoughts.
We liked the world flooded by the rain. From just playing the game we couldn't whether the protag was living in an actual yellow sub or an apartment. Perhaps that was intentional :)
I liked the little smoke animation on the birthday cake! Kinda thought it was a steam boat at first haha.
Had a nice little time with this. Hope to see your story to completion! Congrats on finishing the jam!
- Josh
Thank you! ^^ It was my first jam so it's quite special for me that I was able to present something.
It is an apartment but with all the rain and the isolation, it feels like a submarine ;)
Great idea. Read the slides you had on what the full game might look like when it's finished. Really original idea. Good luck on bringing it to life :) What you had here already is a good foundation. Liked the rain sounds setting the atmosphere. Would be nice to add some sound effects when interacting with other objects later. I also liked the little bits of information we could learn by picking up objects.
thank you for reading and the encouragement! Really appreciate it. And thanks for the suggestions too :)
loved the rain sound. The Submarine text and rain(water) sound primed me into thinking the first purple object was a ship ;).
Short and sweet, got lots of potential! Want to know more about the character and where it will go...
Thank you! :) I'm planning to keep working on it.
It sounds like a nice little concept - I like the colors and the soothing rain effect.
The few bits of dialogue and characterization present here sound very... how do you say it? Inspiring? They give a nice idea in few words of who this character is, and that is great for a narrative game.
Continuing in this style is definitely encouraged! Good entry overall.
thank you for your kind words and the encouragement! And for taking the time to review it. Really appreciate it.