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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #7 | 4.001 | 4.080 |
| Adherence to Theme | #27 | 3.452 | 3.520 |
| Overall | #34 | 3.452 | 3.520 |
| Flow & Clarity | #51 | 2.903 | 2.960 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A real Ghost in the Shell of a read
Very interesting! Had a hard time telling who was speaking and if there was two or three main characters, would love to hear what happens next!
Happy to tell you im writing more.
And thank you for the feedback, im going to try to make it less confusing in the future.
nice use of color to break up the writing (just consider that some folks might be color blind in your choices - not me but I work with a lot of them)
The story of betrayal and technology merging with the supernatural was gripping. However, some parts felt a bit rushed, making it a bit tricky to follow all the details. Overall, a compelling read with a fantastic twist at the end!
I really enjoyed your concept for this one - it's very original, and it's always a treat to see the daemon as the character getting betrayed instead of the one doing the betraying.
Epic, clever and concise. One of the best so far! The ending was amazing.
I do love me a Change Demon tale. Thanks for this yarn.