Creative story! Love when heroes fight magic users. Feel bad about the stalkers, wasn't sure if there was more than one, and if there should be more than one in the story? Love the lonely ending though. Good job!
Awesome story! I love when we get non human perspectives. The description of the ship and how it navigates through space was interesting and I wish I could learn more. Also interested in where the troop will go next.
What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun). Great job!
What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun). Great job!
Awesome imagery, well done setting the scene and the drama. I would have loved more action, but that's so hard with a sci Fi setting where set up is important. Was that Eric's father at the end???
Oh no! Poor Charlotte. Would have loved to hear more of her adventures, her speech was very much what I think about when I think of her species. Good job!
