We love big softies. The action could have been more intense with fewer name drops and more environmental description; show the main character's confusion and fear by making him feel more isolated before Oscar distracts the monster. 

Nice one, I really like seeing the ogres presented in a more thoughtful, introspective light, not just lumbering brutes.

I really love the three part layout of the story. you really got the battlefield vibes going with the medics point of view and the tension that come from knowing Oscar is getting messed up. you definantly got the most out of 1000 words 

A wonderfully clean and nice read. 

When I clicked on this story, based on the title I was expecting yet another generic Battle Brother story. Instead, I was extremely pleasantly surprised! It flows well and feels very polished and intentional. You made me feel a great deal of sympathy for Ollie - well done.

I liked it!

just a great clean read!