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A Sideways Bug Hunt's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #27 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
| Concepts & Originality | #29 | 3.550 | 3.550 |
| Overall | #29 | 3.300 | 3.300 |
| Adherence to Theme | #36 | 3.100 | 3.100 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Nice action and different use of personalization for the main character you don’t see often!
Hey Silver Wargaming!
You've got a thrilling concept here with some intense action scenes that really capture the grimdark atmosphere. The idea of a hive mind and a space bug hunt is always a fun ride, and you nailed the chaotic energy of a boarding assault. To take this story to the next level, try to focus a bit more on the flow between scenes to make it easier for readers to follow the action.
Also, a little more emphasis on the theme throughout the story could help drive home that feeling of things going off the rails. Keep up the great work—you're on the right track!
Thank you for the feedback! I definitely got a bit ambitious, I wanted to focus in on the combat and got super invested, only to realize I had almost run through my word count! I definitely could've benefitted from a bit more balance. Thank you for reading!
I really enjoyed the perspective shift.